Monday 31 March 2008

The Most Beautiful Girl in the World

I was waiting for a friend during a fleeting visit to NY when I saw her.

My friend was 30 mins late,

those that know me know that 10 mins is unacceptable but 30!

I really wanted to see this friend,

if not I would have left.



I ordered an espresso and tried not to get annoyed. I

smelt her before I saw her,

she walked right passed me and she smelt of spring.

Fresh, sweet, flowers in bloom.

And so I turned just to see, as you do.



My heart stilled when I saw her

Never have I seen such amazing beauty

Her eyes, oh her eyes.

They were big and beautiful

I was aware that I was staring

but an earthquake wouldn't have torn my gaze from this creature.



Her hair was long, beautiful big curls

That shaped her face like a frame

making her beauty more apparent

If that was at all possible



Her figure was a joy to behold,

She was neither skinny nor fat

Blessed with curves were curves should be

She was beauitiful, that she was



I watched her as if mesmerised

As she spoke, I watched men and women alike fall under her spell

She laughed but I was too far away to hear here

She threw her head back and rubbed her hands together, so animated was she



She was drinking a latte, at least I think it was a latte

She licked her lips and I was suddenly aware of how it felt to be a man

And to watch a woman weave a web of desire and intoxicating adoration over her prey



She must have felt me looking because she suddenly turned towards me.

My heart stilled but I couldn't look away.

She smiled, her beautiful pearls blinding me for a split second.

I wanted to smile back but she had turned way.



She was wearing a jacket and I guess the she was getting hot because she took it of

Her skin was caramel, unblemished

I noticed she was wearing an engagement ring

And I wondered how any man was able to capture her heart



Tinu, Tinu,

Was I dreaming or was she calling my name

No, It was my friend, not only late but rudely awakening me from my reverie.

I reluctantly averted my gaze to my friend who although beautiful in her own right, paled in comparison.

16 comments:

Chari said...

1ssssssssttttttttt!!!!!!!!!!!!

Chari said...

wooow...hmmn..I love the power in your descriptions

Anonymous said...

BEAUTIFUL....INCREDIBLY BEAUTIFUL!

Jennifer A. said...

Wow...although I totally loved ur description of this mesmerizing beauty, I can't help but feel sorry for ur friend who "paled" in comparism. Lol

tiffanycaselady said...

very noice description

Unknown said...

u r into women now?

dang gurrrlllll

omomummy said...

wow beautiful write up.

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Anonymous said...

wow although a nice post...i cant imagine feeling that way about another woman....

Ms. Catwalq said...

uhhhhhhhhhh

april wan finish o...u go update?

Anonymous said...

u havent updated in april o!

vindication through innocence said...

pele!! dont worry...you should write a book jor- lol at the whole 'made me feel like a man'!! so what were you feeling like before?

Unknown said...

i was here

darkelcee said...

howdy do?been a while.

Just checking on you

Anonymous said...

if i was your friend i go vex oh...ahn ahn..LOL

wordsmith said...

is this the last time we will hear from you :(